critique my physique

I could have done a better monochromatic photo. my photo is boring looking and i wished i had payed more attention to it. I did a photo of the dark sky before a storm because i enjoyed the different colors of the skies and how it was all dark with different tones. The photo i thought i did best on was my red and cyan, the colors were vibrant and sharp. My green and magenta photo is asymmetric and has sharp colors and focus. I focused more on the magenta flower rather than his been eyes. although his eyes are a main focus point i believe the focus on the flower and his green eyes are being focused on also.